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Pink flowers
Given under pink skies
Provoked pink lips on pink lips
Pink tongues in pink mouths
Pink hands on pink hips
Pink panties
Thrown on pink carpeting
Pink bodies
Under pink sheets
Lead to pink lines
On a pink stick
Pink vomit
In a pink bathroom
A protruding pink belly
Concealed under baggy pink sweatshirts
Pink faced agony
A pink baby
In a pink blanket
Tears fall from pink eyes
Pink was always her favourite colour
©2005-2008 ~dukespirit
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I've gotten into the habit of writing poems that don't have much structure. I'll try to work on that.

Well this...came out, when I saw the sky one night, and it was this really cool shade of pink, and I thought it was romantic and it kinda clicked...or something. (although I hate saying that it just 'clicked' *puke*)

I was going to add different shades of pink for each one, but I thought it would make it too long or something.

Well enjoy
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~niceparabola:iconniceparabola: Nov 14, 2005, 7:02:49 PM
Hooooly crap!

This is so excellent. And screw having structure.

Some poems will work with a structure, others won't.

And you've got a pseudo-structure with the pink theme.

Which you did so, so, so well. It doesn't feel overwhelming with all the pink references.

God, this is just awesome.

MAN!


Alie

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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
~niceparabola:iconniceparabola: Nov 14, 2005, 7:03:29 PM
This is some really inspiring work.

I want to write something now...

GEEZ!


Alie

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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
~dukespirit:icondukespirit: Nov 14, 2005, 7:03:44 PM
*blushes* thanks

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Knit until your fingers bleed.

Enid :"Medium is really only for suckers who don't know the concept of value."
~dukespirit:icondukespirit: Nov 14, 2005, 7:04:19 PM
*blushes profusely some more* glad you liked it.

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Knit until your fingers bleed.

Enid :"Medium is really only for suckers who don't know the concept of value."
~niceparabola:iconniceparabola: Nov 14, 2005, 7:07:44 PM
And I think you made a good call on not using a different shade of pink for each one.

It would've added clutter to this, and this is not a piece to be cluttered.

Okay, I'll stop commenting now.

But wow.

W-o-w.


Alie

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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
~niceparabola:iconniceparabola: Nov 14, 2005, 7:08:05 PM
So well deserved.

:D


Alie

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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
~niceparabola:iconniceparabola: Nov 14, 2005, 7:08:17 PM
:D

I love-d it.


Alie

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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
~dukespirit:icondukespirit: Nov 14, 2005, 7:10:45 PM
haha thanks

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Knit until your fingers bleed.

Enid :"Medium is really only for suckers who don't know the concept of value."
~niceparabola:iconniceparabola: Nov 14, 2005, 7:36:02 PM
-The Gunz-


Ale

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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason