Pink flowers
Given under pink skies
Provoked pink lips on pink lips
Pink tongues in pink mouths
Pink hands on pink hips
Pink panties
Thrown on pink carpeting
Pink bodies
Under pink sheets
Lead to pink lines
On a pink stick
Pink vomit
In a pink bathroom
A protruding pink belly
Concealed under baggy pink sweatshirts
Pink faced agony
A pink baby
In a pink blanket
Tears fall from pink eyes
Pink was always her favourite colour














Devious Comments
This is so excellent. And screw having structure.
Some poems will work with a structure, others won't.
And you've got a pseudo-structure with the pink theme.
Which you did so, so, so well. It doesn't feel overwhelming with all the pink references.
God, this is just awesome.
MAN!
Alie
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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
I want to write something now...
GEEZ!
Alie
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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
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Knit until your fingers bleed.
Enid :"Medium is really only for suckers who don't know the concept of value."
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Knit until your fingers bleed.
Enid :"Medium is really only for suckers who don't know the concept of value."
It would've added clutter to this, and this is not a piece to be cluttered.
Okay, I'll stop commenting now.
But wow.
W-o-w.
Alie
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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
Alie
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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
I love-d it.
Alie
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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
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Knit until your fingers bleed.
Enid :"Medium is really only for suckers who don't know the concept of value."
Ale
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you don't belong where the humans eat - willy mason
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